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Post Info TOPIC: Sensual Arousal (Awakening)


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Sensual Arousal (Awakening)


Rain misted hair
With the scent of spring
(Ive just smelled natures perfume)

Her eyes
Two mystic galaxies of secrets
(Ive just seen heaven)

Her skin and her fingertips
Delicate as a newly blossomed orchid
(Ive just touched moistened clouds)

Her voice gentle
As the call of a hushed stream
(Ive just heard breathless words)

And her round mouth
As bright as the sun
(Ive just tasted paradise)

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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W


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So like a portrait, it's stunning.

I like the way this reads, more like strokes than words and in my opinion adds unsaid details to the vision of this piece.

Congrats, my dear, you really put together one gorgeous sentiment and image with this one, and I love the added touch to the title!

Kudos x many,

~Poe

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Thank you Poe! I am glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for helping me out with this. I appreciated that to no end. :D

ps - I remember that I wanted the title to be Sensual Awakening, but I liked the other title too. So I combined both. :D :D :D

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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
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