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Avaricious




Fingers play
harshly
Leaving bright red
prints
A notice to any who
think about nearing
This Body Is Claimed.

Mouth
insistent and sure
Finding the source
and living there
for a breathless
beautiful
moment.

Don't look at me
as if you weren't sure
or aware
of my cunning
ways
And how I can
wrap you around this
finger, these thighs
this purring embodiment
of excitement
as if you were mere
String.

Pacify this hunger
and I might let you
know what it's like
to sleep with the
Goddess
And drink from the
fountain
of Venus.

I'll cease my drumming
along your humming
form
When I've eased this
ache
and insatiable longing
And when you realize
You are nothing more
than
Mine.


©dragonpoe
8/29/07

artwork found at:http://zindy.zone.dk/

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 20:05, 2007-08-29

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Very very nice Poe! There's a sharpness to it that give it a nice kick. I love that! And the picture goes extremely well with your poem as well. Happy writing as always. :)

Your friend,

kutipi2

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thank you! When this started unwinding, I could feel a sharper edge take shape... And it just honed its blade until I was done. :)

Thank you, you know I love to hear your thoughts.
~Lady Poe

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Good Evening Lady Poe, Hope all is well.
This seems to be written differently, not
sure if it was an intentional switch.
Less explained, and a fast pace, had my
mind racing.
The picture fits perfectly and sets the scene
beautifully.

A Lady Poe Masterpiece? Quite possibly...


Thank You For Sharing.

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Thank you for your kindness, Slim.
As for the picture... google is my friend, hehe.
I like the different "voice" in this one, I've been feeling stagnant and reused lately, so this was a treat.
Glad you both enjoyed.
~Lady Poe

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