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Friction




Another angle, another view
friction stimulates the heat
between us two -

Beds breed fantasy
and mouths hunger free
I feel a creature awakening
deep within me.

Forget all words and speak no sounds
displace all thought, let sense abound
across my flesh down to your bone
I fall humbled, tho' you've grown -

Aspects of wanting, lusting, drive
feeling inspired, feeling alive
pulsing vibrations, in and through
every curve of smoothness
you;

Touch me silently, breathing sweet
delicate, invigorating, resplendant treat
cresendo builds, as I touch a dream
Climaxed and beautiful, so esteemed.

Climb down for me honey,
meet me once more
Feed me the passion
I love and adore.

©dragonpoe
8/23/07


Thank you to: www.bucharest-guide.ro for the photo


-- Edited by Lady Poe at 18:46, 2007-08-23

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Greetings, Lady Poe.
It's been a while since we've met. I see you've sharpened your pencil back up, always a pleasure to see.


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I love the photo I found for this one.. Something about the lines she creates tickles my fancy.
~Lady Poe

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Good Afternoon Lady Poe, I enjoyed
the ebb and flow of your Poem.
Warm and sensual, with the best kept
for last. The Final stanza, completes
this beautifully, I love the ending.

Thank You For Sharing.

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thank you. I feel I fell short on the ending, so I appreciate you liking that part.
~Lady Poe

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The ending, More / Adore is really strong, you
are certainly harsh on yourself!!

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