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You cradle my taste buds to sleep
On smooth sweetness of red silk
Yet, it seems to be blood I sip, the seep
Of your being and soul I take in deep

The smells allure, so complex and airy
My mind doesnt know which to wander over first;
Berry, chocolate, cinnamon, cherry
Perhaps Ill take in all at once and let my senses carry

I inhale your desires delight
I drink your mistakes in understanding
Devouring each detail slowly in slight
For to remember all I might

In drowsy sway, I close my eyes
A safe rush of warmth flows through my veins
My breathing assumes a slow fall and rise
As all secrets are released in heavy sighs

I look down at the glass now empty
Except for a single drop lingering
With a saddened smile I drink gently
The last remaining of your existing blood

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Kuti, my dear, this is wonderful. Tasty and ending on a slightly dark note - is that a bit of a vampiric aftertaste? ;O)
Beautiful work, keep it coming!
~Lady Poe

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Poe, I am glad you enjoyed this piece. As for the vampiric aftertaste, yes, but I didn't think about it until it was mentioned to me by another person who read it (didn't exactly like that element of it, but oh well). :D Thanks for your time to read and reply. Much appreciated as always! :D


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