as a flame Touching the moonlight While clouds engulf Whatever heavens The sky conceals
Inspire as the scent of summer rain Which fills a mind With serene clouds of floating And all the Earthly pleasures Of infinity
Run as the wind along the grass Carrying itself too quickly to decipher Where it is destined to be; Traveling through distant lands Taking with it the heart of prayers
Dare as the prevailing storm Unleashes its energy and power To replenish fertile Spring and Summer With all the life and breath of Nature And the beginnings of life anew
Hope as the oldest tree Which reaches its limbs towards the sky Climbing ever slowly and patiently To reach in its lifetime The heavens beyond) (Dream -
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
I'm not sure which one I like best as all three are remarkable. This one is a bit more poetic where as the other two are lyrical, but none are weaker than any other.
I do have to question the ( ) in this one at the end of the poem. But that's the only thing I have to question, the rest is Grade A in my humble opinion.
:)
~Poe
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"..I don't care for your fairytales... - Sara Bareilles
I was inspired by Earthly beauty for some reason. :) The ( ) are meant to make a cycle. It repeats over and over...or at least that was the intent. Thanks again for reading and replying. Glad you liked it!
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
