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Lady Poe


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Down the memories
Straight through bright morning sun
Universal light.

~dragonpoe
2/11/08

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Just lovely. :) I enjoyed the imagery here a lot.

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Thanks!

I think it's lacking wow factor, but it's something, and I'm not one to change my writes, I'll just have to come up with a better one :)

~Poe

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"Lacking the wow factor"! Not at all! :)

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