hey great poem here poe... this has a different voice from you however... one that im not used to coming from you... hard to explain tho... all and all its great poem :)
Very interesting poem. I liked it very very much. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
John - doesn't sound like me? Hmm, I find that curious. I know my style tends to shift, especially after long siestas. It might be because I haven't written poetry in a while.
Kuti - glad you liked it. I've fallen off the writing wagon so far, as you know! I hate these slumps. I think I need to smack myself in the head a few times and get those gears spinning again.
Speaking of..... SO DO YOU! :)
~Poe
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"..I don't care for your fairytales... - Sara Bareilles
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
