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My Home


In hill tops do I rest
Mountains that create my inner strength
Song that birds don't understand
It is here where I meet my creator
Beyond water droplets that fill my cup
The shores of my thoughts nesting in home not far from here
Monsters to the north invade my home
Come south as they must
Only to find me broken
I shall break free from this life
I called it to my warning
It is here to set me free
Now lies my body to be remembered or forgotten
Maybe both sides just makes me who I am
A stone just placed above my head
Time just freezes for me
Yet I do not find my home
Nor do I find my life
It is an endless array of lights to shine my path
Ones filled with many colors
Blended together to make my White Angel
I shall pray for you
If I don't... you shall forever be sent below
Maybe my home is here
A place where magical creatures fight away the blackness
All forgiven and never taken away
The blue in me reflects my happiness
A place where the room is long forgotten about
The forest never laughs anymore
Maybe I am not used to such silence
A place above my underworld where black creatures shall die
Maybe this is my home

-- Edited by Johnny Boy at 01:49, 2008-01-03

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This is amazing and beautiful...I love poetry that gives me goosebumps with its magic and this one certainly has!!!

20/10 for this one!!

Dreamstress X


Where is everyone?????????????????????????????????????????????????

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:) why thank you very much dream... i truely apreciate it... i dont know... kinda wonderin myself... for awhile i wasnt writing but i have been in a total mental block LOL :( oh well... its kinda comin back to me... as far as everyone goes... no clue

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Hello!!


Where the hell have I been?!?!

Wow, great to see you writing and posting!

Brilliant opening line you got going on.. Poetic and flowing.

Keep 'em coming, we need to spark a fire under Epyllion's butt and get things moving again!

Smiles,
~Poe

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Johnny, I love the mixed emotions and images you have here! Very well done. :) It's nice to read your poetry again. :)

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hehe sorry i missed your guys comments... thank you guys very much... :)

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how dare you delete my website!!! *sniff*

Stop foolin' around with that damn PC and keep me bookmarked! ;)
hehee...

Keep 'em coming. I'm going to try doing better and posting more.

~Poe

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