Lavish stars and moons Burn bright in joyous bliss As aromas of night blooming lilac Waft in clouds of still air
Such mystical night - Spy on a woman in a rocking chair Softly humming a humbling song For springs gold-tint baby Laying placidly in caring arms
Aloft, rays of a lullaby In worship, wrap Its tiny body of purity In music, charity of birth
a/n - This is for a contest where we weren't allowed to use 'e's! It was inspired by the fact that my band director and his wife are having their first child. I think it could be better...but...enjoy anyways. :)
-- Edited by kutipi2 at 18:46, 2007-11-17
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
I know you've been working on this one and I think I see what's stumping you.. Second stanza, second line.. take out "To"... I think this is lovely. A wonderful tribute to both music and life....
Kudos, m'dear. Kudos.
~Lady Poe
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"..I don't care for your fairytales... - Sara Bareilles
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Hehehe! I would like to thank...*takes out a long list*...Lady Poe, for helping me rewrite and rewrite this over and over again. :) Thank you. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
