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Beginning...



It started with a tiny thread, so miniscule and insignificant
And light that gleamed of dullest gold, breaking through
The shadows.

Came a voice, softly singing upon the wind, blending in
With a summer storm's tempest.
Fate locked its bars and twisted the road, no smooth pavement
For the traveller.

Weary is he? No, not any more. Satisfied in a part of his soul;
Calmed in part of his spirit, and terrified in part of his mind.
He looks out to the empty fields surrounding him, home and
Comfort, as hes always known.

Lightning is she, hot and sporadic.
Her dreams plague the night and her heart resounds thunder.
And when she feels him, she feels him down to her bones
Smile curling her colored lips.

It started with a tiny thread, so miniscule and insignificant
And light that gleamed of dullest gold, breaking through
The shadows.

©dragonpoe
10/22/07


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Very interesting imagery Poe. Very lovely and imaginative indeed. :)

-- Edited by kutipi2 at 22:52, 2007-10-22

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Thank you. I wanted something soft and fancy, if that's the right word.

Again, thank you for reading and replying.

~Lady Poe

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Lovely images here, my Lady Poe........makes me want to read more, and more...(smile).

Dreamstress X

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Thank you very much m'dear!!

~Lady Poe

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I second what Dreamstress said. :)

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