When the world is cast Amongst silver hues and stars We are not part of The Earth, but rather we fly To some far off land An abyss of mirages Tangled in our mind Between the clouds and the truth
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Aw! Thank you Poe for your kindness. It's just a simple little poem really. But thank you. I appreciate it. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Well drat...I noticed that I messed up. I ended with a 5 syllable-7 syllable instead of 7-7. Oh well...I must fix that...
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
When the world is cast Amongst silver hues and stars We are not part of The Earth, but rather we fly To some far off land An abyss of mirages Tangled in our minds somewhere Between the clouds and the truth
- all changed now :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
This is the first Choka that I have read ...I closed my eyes and picked....this is beautiful....it sails between the mysterious and the magical....and I love it.
Lovely job!
Dreamstress x
P.S. Now off to have a look at the others.... (smile)
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"Sweet is the dream, divinely sweet, when absent souls in fancy meet."
Edgar Allan Poe
Yes you do. :) Thank you very much for your comment. Very much appreciated as always. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
