If you check my list you can see I have a 2004 and 2005 edition of this theme... both unique in their own way... I have no explanation as to why I have no 2006 edition... I'm sorry about that. But here is one I've finished just 5 minutes ago. Do tell me if you like it:
Curious to chronicle your years in such a fashion. I like that you put a little more depth into the ending two stanzas, but you are still a youngun so have many more years ahead of you to fill in stanzas with life "things".
Enjoyed the read.
~Lady Poe
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"..I don't care for your fairytales... - Sara Bareilles
Very nice Alexe, I really enjoyed this. Reflection is always a good thing, and you have it galore in this poem. That's what makes is fascinating for me. :) Great job! Oh, and HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY! :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Thank you very much, ladies! Lady Poe - are you saying my life problems are more shallow than yours because I'm younger? I appreciate your honest comments and I'm happy I've entertained you with my nonsense
enticing and interesting. very eloquently worded and well written. loved the style and the theme was a good solid one. great technique. all in all I enjoyed it very much. outstanding job. p.s. (lest you think my poetry is usually as awful as my random post i have written some others that better fit my style, i was in an odd mood that day...) -peace
thank you very much, S I know I kinda abandoned this place but the truth is I was feeling poetry abandoned me :( thanks for taking the time to read it and I'll drop by your own some time (if I haven't already) cheers!
Aww, it's hard feeling that way, but it'll come back. Good luck Alexe! :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
