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slimboydim


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Slice our flesh,
Soulmates blooded.
Life force blends,
River of lust.

Smear this mix,
Upon your lips.
Bloody Kisses,
Love unleashed.





-- Edited by slimboydim at 16:19, 2007-10-14

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Lady Poe


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Powerful and raw.....
Lovely.
But you know this is my kind of thing.......

Kudos.
~Lady Poe

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beautiful
as short as it is, as powerfully it throws its message through
"bloody kisses" is sort of ... masochism
but each with its own
great drop

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...Interesting - as much as I enjoy short poetry, this leaves me wanting more - give me something less abstract to hold onto at the end; a picture, a moment, a look.

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