Fall from grace No hope now of reclaiming brighter days behind Morning turned to mourning in one fateful gasping breath The way has been lost, shadows creep stealing the last bit of comfort from the forlorn soul who only wanted life.
Excellent flow, and wow...your words...very haunting, very chilling. Many kudos to you. :)
__________________
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
"stealing the last bit of comfort from the forlorn soul who only wanted life." amazing ending you have an amazingly developed poet's soul and imagination! congratulations for this great piece
