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Derelict


Another Oldie!!




The cobbled path is cracked and worn
The door where once folk entered
Hangs all askew, one time t'was new
And now is old and splintered

Dark shadows thrown by moonlight's glow
Through cracked and misty pane
Casts haunting shadows on the walls
Where cobwebs stake their claim

This house holds countless memories
Of those who lived before
Who knows what tales these walls could tell
Beyond the old front door


Dreamstress x





-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 13:09, 2007-10-10

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Ooohhhhh I love this one, m'dear....

Rich and full and brilliant. Love the meter and rhyme and the second stanza is my favorite.

Kudos.

~Lady Poe

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Yes, brilliant indeed! The imagery was really outstanding, and just the feel of it...oh! Lovely lovely job! Thank you for sharing this. :)

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