Wonderful imagery indeed. I also loved your use of the senses in this poem. It brought it alive, as well as the quick pace. :) I'm glad you pulled this out to share it with us. :D
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
