I agree, the opening haiku is gorgeous and the rest to follow beautiful.
I miss the Fall and Winter!!!
The lot of you are going to make me jealous! So you better share poems, photos and whatnot as the seasons fade into the bleak tail-end of winter. And I'll tell you how I sat on the beach and walked thru the ocean
Seriously, lovely writes, each one.
~Lady Poe
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"..I don't care for your fairytales... - Sara Bareilles
Very lovely poems to the seasons here. I loved the different feelings in each one. Great job. And yes, make us jealous. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Thank you very much! (note to self: I should develop my "thanking" replies) Honestly, it's great to have a site where 3 replies are guaranteed 100% Especially when those 3 come from such masters of the words Many thanks! @ Tess: it's not actually "poems" but "poem" composed of more stanzas of Senyru and Haiku form, showing my interpretation of the transition from autumn to winter... I meant it as one story... but I'm sure you knew that and I misinterpreted what you said, so I'm sorry Thank you again :)
P.S.: should I put this to the list? is it "list worthy" ?
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
sorry if it's one big stew of Haiku and Senyru together, I'm just testing the waters a tad :
