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Post Info TOPIC: B.A.D. C.H.A.R.A.C.T.E.R.


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B.A.D. C.H.A.R.A.C.T.E.R.


"I ain't a killa but don't push me! Revenge is like the sweetest joy next to getting pussy..." - 2Pac

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-- Edited by ALEXE at 04:12, 2008-03-04

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Well done indeed!

Each line smoothly rolls into the next and you round it off perfectly at the end.

I don't do much acronymns, but you make them appealing!

Kudos.

~Lady Poe

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Yes, I miss acronymns. I don't usually do them either, but they can be fun. :) Lovely job here, and the last line was a great way to end it. :)

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Good Morning Alexe, hope all is well.
Must admit the title grabbed my attention,
when I originally saw your list of Poems.
Although filled with hate and aggression,
the feeling is very measured, almost calculating.
It has an intensity that scares, but an element
that leaves you wondering what has gone before,
to bring such bad feeling.
Made me think, and I certainly enjoyed reading.

Thank You For Sharing.

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