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I Belong






-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 15:16, 2007-10-02

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It won't let me make a pyramid!!!!


oh dear.. What's it not doing?????

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Well...I typed it out, all nicely centralised in Word, then I copied and pasted....it didn't work and it ended up slipped to the left hand side as you look at it. Then I tried cutting and pasting...same thing happened!!!

Any advice would be gratefully received!

Dream - Stressed!! X

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I Belong


Yippee!! Did it!!!

I
Belong
To this moment.
Yesterday is well past
And Tomorrow is just a dream
That lies at the back of my restless mind
Just waiting to come true, as most dreams should.
But then, I never quite can sense the exact moment
When Tomorrow arrives, although I wait and wait and wait,
It always lies just beyond the reach of my imagination, where
Frustratingly, I am unable to grasp it and it slips between my fingers
Becoming Yesterday and I am left alone, wondering and wanting and wishing.


©Sally Clarke 01/10/2007






-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 15:30, 2007-10-02

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You did do it, indeed.

Beautiful. The poem itself is one of familiar resonance and I love it and appreciate the thoughts behind it. You are a remarkable poet, m'dear.

Lovely.

~Lady Poe

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Thank you.....! I still have heaps to learn though as I am only a "beginner" but I know that if I stick around here I shall be ok!

Dreamstress x

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Wow! The poem is amazing even without the structure
But damn! does it sound good reading it like that biggrin.gif
I never tried a pyramid, but I just might, soon
Beautiful poem, I can also relate to every verse and I believe you've displayed it extraordinarily
Bravo!

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Gosh! Thank you!! It took me a while to get the wording right and even longer to get the shape right (grin) but I got there in the end. Thank you for taking the time to check it out and comment.

Much appreciated.

Dreamstress x

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