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I listen to your heart and it lulls me to sleep
dreams carry me far away, but I am always safe.

I fell into a love-puddle, and drenched myself
and woke to the sound of your heart beating -

And the world was right again.

©dragonpoe
10/01/07

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Lovely lovely lovely! I can feel the sentimentalist in you Poe, breaming at it's finest. Short, sweet (in all forms of the word), and simple, but not so. Excellent job my dear. :)

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Awwwww, thank you very much, kuti..... Very much.

~Lady Poe

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Love "Love-puddle"....just LOVE it!!!


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hehe, i liked the image it gave me, too.

Thank you.

~Lady Poe

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My pleasure, Lady Poe...

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The picture is something I could read for ages! Same goes for the poem biggrin.gif
Beautiful connecting rhymes!
It's circular - heart beat motif coming around - it's romantic - implying close contact, bodies rubbing, sharing sleep - it's comic - 3rd line smile.gif - it's surreal - dreaming far but always safe - it's divine! - The World Was Right Again!
I could go on forever!

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