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Lady Poe


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Ice crystallizing blood flow
Veins rupture
Mind screams in agony
Time stops moving.

Barking from the inside
Hearing voices
Telling me to do it,
How splendid the fall
Would be.

Snap.

Reprieve is out there
In here, strangling this
Tormented wretch
Buffoon.

Forgiving is made
For Gods own
Never one to follow
Alone on the road
To damnation.

Snap.

Feel prickles
Hands fall still
Nevermore
No, nevermore
Time stops moving
Lips stop moving
All stops

Snap.


©dragonpoe
9/28/07


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The Dreamstress


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Another goosebumps moment there, Lady Poe....

Dreamstress x

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Orpheus


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Like the use of 'snap' in this piece, as percussive effect.

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Lady Poe


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Thank you both, very much..
Orpheus, I like to play around with words sometimes, finding an appeal that just comes out more so than the others. So thank you for picking that part out and liking it.

~Lady Poe

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