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Distant Song


Lost forever upon some foreign land
Where the wind brushes the green grasses
And the mist of rain lingers, still,
With the chilly cloud filled air,
A soft song penetrates
Of all hope undone,
The bittersweet
Melody
Flown to
You


*not the best I have...I know...ugh...*

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Nice title, hehe.

See, I knew there was a poem buried inside that noggin of yours!
Delightful, my friend. Crisp and refined, saying just enough to give me a breezy feeling...
Well done.
Kudos.
~Lady Poe

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Thanks...I appreciate it...

-- Edited by kutipi2 at 22:19, 2007-09-27

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I love this....can really sense the place and the mood...lovely

Dreamstress x

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Thank you Dreamstress, much appreciated as always. :)

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Good Evening Kutipi, hope all is well.
I like this, it has a warm feel, an air
of tranquillity. Sadness permeates, a
really wonderful Etheree.


Thank You For Sharing.

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Kindest Regards Slim.


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Thank you very much slimboydim, I'm glad you liked it. :)

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