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Lady Poe


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Cracked
Collecting dust
Spilled
A heart of rust
Tattered
Wings no more
Battered
Upon bedroom floor

Teapot
Turned kettle black
Screaming
For hell to take her back
Frightened
Of what hides in light
Terrified
Of what waits at night

Helpless
Little child
Hopeless
Romantic wild
Brilliant
Body and mind
Fading
Quickly from time

Pretty little porcelain doll
Let the darkness consume
You.
Pretty little porcelain doll
Who plays with you now?

-dragonpoe
3/11/06


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The Dreamstress


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So tragic....

Superb write...Lady Poe..

Dreamstress x

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Lady Poe


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Thank you very kindly!!
You know I value your opinion.
~Lady Poe

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kutipi2


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Tragic indeed! What a sad ending too. The last emotional kick to the reader...so well done. :)

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