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The Unwritten Poem


This one isn't new but it is one that I like


Divine underline for the taking
Draw my pleasure for you entertainment
Watch your movie so I can't see your future
Put me on the shelf so that no one can open me
Old as you thought I was
I come to you as your drawer to open life
Intermission has come to take your second half
Poisoned eyes bleed for your vision to come across again
Open my heart once more and let you find it again
The roads that led me to you still exist
We just have to find them again
Lonely spirits to see the trees blocking our light
We saw the balls of light form together
Energy arose from our souls to unite
Carve your initials in my body
Does that make it official?
One by one the words just can't describe my feelings
The letters couldn't form together to show you
The paragraphs were never made for you
However the title has been started
The candle lit shall wait for a poem to be written
The pen waits for a voice to be heard
Even though it happens everyday
The candle shall never go out
This poem will be written

-- Edited by Johnny Boy at 18:29, 2007-09-18

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I know you have more that I like better than this, but this isn't all that bad smile.gif
Great to see you posting again, and I hope to see some NEW stuff soon!!!

~Lady Poe

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haha hey i like this one... and yes and will post some NEW ones soon LOL thank you for reading it again

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A very interesting and thoughtful poem. :) Great job.

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It is an honour to be amongst such poets...

I love the lines.."The candle lit shall wait for a poem to be written
The pen waits for a voice to be heard"

Love it.

Dreamstress x

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thank you guys very much guys... honor huh? wow that really means alot to me dreamstress :)

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