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Damned


I
Am one
With the dim
Shadows of night,
Floating as the mist
Of the rolling fog that
Caresses the waters edge
Between air and abysmal depths
I engorge the stars which used to glow
To allow myself to be swallowed in
An eternity of dark silhouettes;
Whispers mumbles and sighs echoing
Pleas and haunting cries in my ears
From ghosts of another past -
Ghosts that I never knew
I extinguish the
Sun so the chill
Reminds Me
What I
Am



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Bravo! Bravo!!
I love the way this "looks" great appeal visually.
As for the poem itself - wonderful!!

~Lady Poe

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Thank you Poe. Not bad for my second etheree every written huh? lol

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I'll second Lady Poe's comments....I love the slight shiver it gave me too!

Dreamstress x

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Thank you Dreamstress. You can tell I've been talking to Poe lately...haha. :)

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