Indeed, thank you for sharing this. I've noticed that your poems always make me think (in a good way of course hehe). Great job here! Excellent for the first attempt.
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Good Evening Dreamstress, hope all is well. Your Etheree has a real flow to it. It is so nice to read something with such rhythm, and as a first attempt, just amazing. Thank You For Sharing.
