Do I see you up ahead? One who has no meaning The line of hope vanishing before me Too many mistakes over comes my better side Only forgiveness shall replenish me I ask for your forgiveness Will you take my hand and guide to me to my happiness? One who can turn blackness into a brightness Only then shall I be truely happy My soul shall leave my body As for now... I shall walk toward that black horizon The one I created
:) thank you very much poe... and yes i agree i do tend to have more feeling toward my shorter ones... its funny how i can write a three sentence poem better then some of my really long ones LOL oh well thank you very much for reading my poem poe :) i always love to hear from you :)
Good Morning Johnny Boy, hope you are well. I really like this, you get your thoughts over in a relatively short Poem, a great skill to have. Also love the thought of "Black Horizon" conjures so many things up in my mind.
hey slim... i opoligize for not getting to your reply sooner :( i thank you very much for your reply and your thoughts on my poem and yes it seem as if i do write my shorter peices better then my longer but i do have quite a few good long ones :) i do appreciate you reading my poem :)
