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kutipi2


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Woman in the Waterfall

Enlaced in a trance
As the sunlight streams upon her water droplet skin
Being washed, caressed by the flowing falls,
She beams a radiant hue of gold

Sighing in her solitude
She resides in the relaxation of the whispers
Of the rushing water on her bare nakedness
With a smile she forgets the convention of clothes

She bends as a slender bamboo
Gently following her curves with her fingertips
Inhaling the mist she closes her eyes
Enlaced in a trance


-- Edited by kutipi2 at 18:39, 2007-09-17

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I think this is perfect here, it denotes beauty and one with nature.
Very lovely write. Too bad you couldn't get that perfect pic to accompany it, but it's still great!
Kudos, my friend.
~Lady Poe

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Thank you Poe! I always appreciate hearing from you. :)

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This is stunning.....such images....

Dreamstress x

P.S. Check your p.m's - I think I've found a pic for you!!! I won't be offended if it's not suitable.:o)

-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 16:21, 2007-09-17

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I got the picture! Thank you so much! She's astounding! :)

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The photo adorning this is perfect! And you and I had struggled so long to find a pic! Leave it to m'dear dreamstress to find the perfect piece!

Still a very wonderful write......

~Lady Poe

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I like the lyrical opulence of the language in this piece, which is very fitting. But then I think all poems should be that way, whatever the subject.

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hey, another TPSer!! i am soulgarden... anyway your poem was top notch. I am impressed with the quality of this short piece. great insight, and interpretation of a very cool picture. It was a pleasure to read this poem, very proffessionally done. Great Job.
-peace

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Orpheus - thank you so much for you kind comment. I appreciate it very much. :)

SoulsParadise - Hey! I remember you! It's great to see another TPSer on here. :) Whoa...professionally done...? Top notch...? Great insite...? Nah :) You flatter me so. lol Actually, I wrote the poem first, then dear Dreamstress found the picture for me. :D Again, it was nice to hear from you again. I hope find yourself at home on this site. :)

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psss... *that SoulsParadise guy is crazy*

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I don't buy that for a second. hehe

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