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All Is Not Well


Good Morning, wrote this a couple of months
ago, at a time of upheaval...


All Is Not Well.


Intransigent, obstinate doctrine, reeks of despair,
Scriptures in blood, upon rancid flesh.
Cryptic writings, damnation infested with Satans Wrath,
Sacrificial rape, bound to Altar of Filth.
Repugnant Sodomites repudiate decency,
Strangle life, while executing deviant abhorrence.
Battle rancid stench, diseased schizophrenic thinking,
Wrestle conscience, welcome to deaths, kingdom of hatred.


Justified by revenge, of my own petard,
Surviving protagonist inherits, perfidious Tontines spoils.
Plagued by insanity, lifes limitless atrocities,
Nailed to the cross, by deceit and contempt.
Rats scurry beneath, fight over putrid detritus,
Morbid curiosity entices the agitators.
Spit in the face,
Of my lifeless, Hell bound corpse.








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Nice. I mean that in a harsh and twisted way.
You've always impressed me with your dark writes, think I said that already, but you know how it is.

Love the title too, so simple.. All Is Not Well, yet what those mundane words "mean" well.... that is fully not simple at all.

Well done.
~Lady Poe

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Good Evening and Thank You.
Spot on with your thoughts, the title
is from a favourite album of mine.
The simple title, hides the harshest
Female vocal ever...

Thank You for reading.

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