Note: In response to Ian's request to post my full-on homoerotic work. I like to think this project is both full-on and poetic.
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The film is glistening with my thumb and forefinger around the storm-rim; slowly, they slip down the shaft in search of the root, the pressure-point of the blood influx, they tighten like a vice, forcing the blood to the head, making its surface seem polished, the film a pearl crown, translucently inviting the eye into the urethra.
II
My tongue upon the dilated slit, a camera lens that photographs the red face of my desire, the third eye gathered over the pubic hair is the clearest, its dilation functional rather than romantic, its squeezed jewel an offering of encouragement to swallow.
III
My mouth slides down the shaft, moved on by the saliva that trails as a lubricant for the quick ascent, the raking of teeth till they catch on the purple rim, a lollypop head I grip lightly, the pressure making the head engorge to beauty, a magical mushroom in the pubic valley.
IV
I lift my head, sensing your imminence, my hand curls around the root, forcefully masturbates the livid penis. After several strokes, I rest my fingers at the root, letting the blood drain before resuming with renewed vigour, the rhythm inexorable, headed for climax, for a string of pearls I'll wear round my neck. You come, the semen splashing my breast-bone.
Very detailed, to say the least. As for homoerotic, the reader wouldnt' know unless you stated that the voice in here is male. As a woman reader, i read it from a woman's POV, and so hear a female voice. ~Lady Poe
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I agree with what Lady Poe said. I couldn't tell it was homoerotic at all, but I knew it was only because you said so in your note. As for the poem itself, I loved the details and the passion! Excellent job all together. :)
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