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Carve My Frenzy

Pull your grip through my liquid skin
throbbing and urging
the stars to spin
outside their contented orbits.

Stretch your fingers to my chest
and carve my frenzy
from its stabled
refuge.

I feel your breasts along my knees
and your breath between my thighs
as my emotions dawn
from latent depths.

Kiss me with your tongue,
kiss me with your teeth,
kiss me with your moaning,
and draft me from my melancholy.




-- Edited by bravestone at 20:35, 2007-07-26

-- Edited by bravestone at 20:40, 2007-07-26

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Yummilicious, my friend.
I had to look at the pic twice to see it!! You are a trip.
I think I'm tacking this one on the TOP TEN board.
OOOHhhhh NEW Idea for a forum....... :)
~Lady Poe

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Again, I stumble across one or two words that seem to jolt me out of the piece, this time it's "moaning" the hits me the most - I love the stanza with the title in it though - this is great work, again.

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I can see that. Thanks for the input. I appreciate it.



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Delicious. (no pun intended lol)

A sensual frenzy.

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