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Fade


Blinking lights twinkle and fade
and all that was has gone away;
Trinkets and follies, along with dollies
not up in the attic, but shoved away
where no light can reach them and
shadows lengthen gray.

Stars aren't heaven but a trap in disguise
endless and brutal, those midnight eyes;
blinking and spellbinding, but never the same
when relentless and senseless, they
fade away...

Blinking lights glitter and twitter like smiles
shining and blinding and all the while -
aching and breaking, the shadows grow cold
when the lights go out and all fades
away.

~dragonpoe
8/10/08

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Definately a bit of a darkness in this poem. I sense that the speaker has given up on their faith in beautiful things (or seemingly beautiful as the case may be). A very interesting write here. I really enjoyed this!

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