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Circumstantial Kills


Moon weeps silver starlight tears
while her blood shades the soil
Angels lament with woeful songs and
all Light's creatures recoil.

Wicked memories whispering through trees
agonizing desolation - Lend a prayer please!
To ease such a weary, aching soul;

Cloacked in shadow's deepest of chills
There in sleep-view she sees her screaming in vain
Colored pale by hot searing pain.

Left to fight battles long ago bloodied
once crystal life waters now running muddied -
As she fades into midnight broken and forlorn
just another victim of circumstantial kills.

dragonpoe
1/29/08


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Wow...the imagery was just chilling...and your words. Shivers my dear. Shivers.

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mmm mmm mmm great image here... i think i was picturing what you were while you were writing it :) and i like it :) great poem poe

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Thank you both for reading and replying. Glad you liked it :)

~Poe

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