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Dust


~Dust
settles
drawing forth
multitudes of
universal light
in movement seemingly
erratic, yet if one looks
they just might find another world
sitting atop that fragment of earth
spinning, turning, ever-moving, on dust~



~dragonpoe
1/8/08

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Wow!! Puts me in mind of the end shot of Men In Black....you know where the giant alien is playing marbles with galaxies!!!!wink.gif

Good one, Lady Poe!!!

Dreamstress X

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hahaha.. Love that movie.

Thank you for taking a look and leaving a comment.

Been a while since I've constructed one of these!

:)

~Poe

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Very cool Poe! I like how the poem rounds out, as well as the imagery you have used. Great job! :)

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Thank you.

I had forgotten this piece, I kind of like it :)

~Poe

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I am glad that you do. :)

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