Oooh, I love it! Very song-like. :) I like the rhythm and the feel of this poem very much. I also adore the picture. :D Great job!
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
You're welcome. Thank you for putting up with me yesterday...tee-hee. :D I'm glad you like the banner.
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W