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You're Lost.


Forget -
In the fog of the mind
all else is running
out of time
And you're lost.

All roads twist and turn
breath rasps, lungs burn
no hope of help
screaming and pleading
in the Silence.

Drag the heart thru mud
and all you ever could
have held slips thru fingers
covered in blood.

Now -
forget, in the fog of mind
time is gone, a crime is crime
Bleed your apologies
never knowing forgiveness.

You're lost.

©dragonpoe
11/7/07



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Oooh, twisted! Very very twisted! Gave me goosebumps and shivers! Whoo...great great job! :)

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Goosebumps?? yes!
hehe

thank you very much for reading.... you know I appreciate it.

~Lady Poe

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No problem! I love reading your work. :)

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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
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