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The Plea


I am
not real.
I fly through eternity,
reaching out
but not quite touching,
desperately needing
substance.
I am
liquid thoughts.
flowing through an open mind,
a dream
half forgotten
in the light of day.
I want to be
...remembered.

©Sally Clarke 28/10/2007




-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 04:23, 2007-10-28

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OOOhhhhhhh

I love this. Absolutely love it!

Gentle yet......mesmerizing..
Something I feel very closely.

Bravo.

~Lady Poe

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Wow, very thought provoking. I loved how you used a gentle style throughout this, but that the poem had a deeper meaning. :) Very well done! :)

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