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The Dreamstress


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She tries so hard
To fathom out
The swirling mists
That twist perplexingly
Under her gaze.
Her future lies within
This cold,
Unfeeling orb,
So she was told.
What lessons
Could she learn
About tomorrow?
Should she stay
And discover?
Or should she leave
And let tomorrow
Take care
Of itself.


©Sally Clarke 23 October 2007



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-- Edited by The Dreamstress at 10:24, 2007-10-23

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kutipi2


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Dreamstress, this was very clever. And the picture was beautiful as well. I liked the flow and the ideas very much. Great poem. :)

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Lady Poe


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Very well done, m'dear.
I am still working on mine, half way done, but since I stopped to go to work, I hope I can pick it up and continue it.

Yours is simply delightful, as always.

~Lady Poe

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