One by one, snip snip Fates thread is cut as I sit In the darkest place Conquered in my mind, Conceived by devils, Harbored by many angels, Limbo for eternity
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Couldn't have done it without you Poe. Kudos to you for your help. :)
-- Edited by kutipi2 at 12:25, 2008-04-19
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
"could have" *ahem* I honestly find it ridiculous not this poem itself but all of these forms you come up with I find no base to their variation! I can add a syllable and make up my own form after my own name
sorry if I offend anyone, it's really not my intention I respect you all, but I find these "Choka" and "Senyru" (at least those with very small difference between them) to be simple whims.
on the other hand, this poem is beautiful teh beginning is so creative and such a sudden appearance of "angels" in the text as well as "limbo" was it's quite refreshing, though, very nice read
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
