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Silent Attraction




At last, the words come
If such words could speak of love
I would speak them so
But they'd never reach such depths
Of the human soul
So I play for you my love
The lone song I know
This sighing song of my heart
Maybe soon it will
Find the wind and travel far
And whisper softly
All that I have ever wished
Maybe soon you will
Turn your head to the window,
Gaze at the moon, same as I


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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W


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Beautiful. And this picture works so well with the words...
I love these lines the most:

"Maybe soon it will
Find the wind and travel far
And whisper softly
All that I have ever wished"
Love the whole thing.
Now, you are two for two on these Choka's.. I only have one! hehehe

I do think this is a suitable form for you. Two for two you did perfectly.

~Lady Poe

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Nothing is ever perfect. :) But thank you for your sweet comment. :) I appreciate it.

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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
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