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It Takes Two


One
Cannot
Pretend to
Know the heart of
All that seems to drift
Upon surreal image
Floating upon one night's breath
And coming to land with the dawn
Fragrant illusions bring to life these
Moments one cannot bring to life alone.


©dragonpoe
10/21/07

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 21:46, 2007-10-21

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So true Poe. I loved this. The flow was great and the thoughts were interesting too. May I dub you "Queen of Etherees" ? I don't know how you come up with these magnificent etherees so quickly. But I digress...

AWESOME job Lady. :)

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Aww thank you..

And here I said I wanted to scratch out "one" more poem after my Choka before bed!!!
:)

Thank you very much... I'll wear the crown proudly.. I do love these, can't decide which one I favor more.. the senyru or the etheree..... Close race.

~Lady Poe

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Indeed, and you write them both so well!!! :)

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