Excellent! I am so proud of you. The flow was perfect, and the wording was great, and the images were well done. Lovely first (which I can't believe ) !
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Thank you. For your kind words and for you teaching me this lovely style. I simply followed your example, so you that means yours is equally as excellent and lovely :)
~Lady Poe
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"..I don't care for your fairytales... - Sara Bareilles
You flatter me so, Lady Poe...I was a POEt and I didn't even know it. :D
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W