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kutipi2


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Oh Angel Slumb'ring, Dare a Kiss I Bring? (Lai Nouveau)
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Oh angel slumbring
Dare a kiss I bring?
I fear
Your stirred awaking
From sweet peaceful spring
Ill near
But restful dreams cling
As a downy wing

Lightly succumbing
The moonlight glowing
So sheer
From pale skin beaming
My heart keeps singing
Its tear
Dare a kiss I bring
Oh angel slumbring?


If you're interested in the form, go to this link and scroll down. :)

http://www.baymoon.com/~ariadne/form/lai.htm#formLaiNouveau

-- Edited by kutipi2 at 21:27, 2007-10-19

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Very lovely.. Very classical, too.
What a daring rhyme sequence to tackle too, A tip of the Hat to you, m'dear.
Lovely work.

~Lady Poe

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kutipi2


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Thank you Poe. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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