a/n: I have tried something new with the quatrain form. I call it the Super Quatrain. It's a rhyming ABC, use the last letter of the previous line as the first letter of the next line, poem. Enjoy. :)
Aged and gently frosted drab, Barren trees stand still and sporadic Caressed by the moonlight which beamed Descending from heavens dreamed
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Thank you very much Lady Poe. It was fun and challenging to write, that's for sure. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
damn, real weird structure but you pulled it off the best if you didn't explain the ABC start and finish pattern I would've considered this a beautiful, imaginative, nature-inspired, great dedication to the season... but it has an awesome structure as well
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
Hm. I just realized something...this can't be a quatrain because there is no way to make lines 2 and 4 rhyme...bummer. Oh well, enjoy it anyways. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
