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~Wall~


Still as the dead, breathing scattered shadows
Trying not to cry - don't make a sound
~blood stain on the wall~

Crackling fear resonates, they're going to hear
Displacement of guilt drives demons near
~another notch on the wall~

Scarlet, the night wimpers in obedience
nothing left but metallic taste of defeat
~her name etched on the wall~

Cries echo as the final blow falls
All she tried, failed - finding her there
~hidden against the wall~


©dragonpoe
10/9/07

-- Edited by Lady Poe at 08:24, 2007-10-10

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Shivers my friend, shivers. I think the repeated lines about the wall give it a little something extra...like...another mystery. Haha, I guess. :) In any case, I loved this very much, for it shows how dark you can go. :)

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Thank you very much.

Every now and then I have the urge for repetition in my work.

Glad you liked.

~Lady Poe

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Very much liked. :)

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