Shivers my friend, shivers. I think the repeated lines about the wall give it a little something extra...like...another mystery. Haha, I guess. :) In any case, I loved this very much, for it shows how dark you can go. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W