If a movie was so inspiring that it made you write a poem about it, to it, as a dedication or continuance of that movie, post here! I have a few oldies I don't know if I should post cause they are old and not fresh but I might cop out a few others in the future. Cheers
~ (written on 5.07.2005) *inspired by El Maquinista (2004) - How can you wake up from a nightmare if you are not asleep? - http://www.themachinistthemovie.com/ ~ -- Edited by ALEXE at 05:21, 2007-10-16
I love the mantra on the end of each stanza, brilliant - wraps each verse well. This is a write I could have used a couple of weeks ago when I had the most horrid case of insomnia. Only one little nit - pick and I apologize in advance....
instable should be unstable
I really like this, great tone.. very urban. ~Lady Poe
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"..I don't care for your fairytales... - Sara Bareilles
Thank you for appreciating it :) and thank you for the kind observation, though I found them to be synonyms on the Miriam-Webster dictionary. I will change it, though, I'm sorry for challenging your note there, it does me great good indeed. Cheers
but I might cop out a few others in the future. Cheers
