and so inspired you were to 'whip' these babies out so wonderful, you can depict the scene so easily and beautifully... I have much more to travel till I find such ease to pull my thoughts through rhyme and splendor. I see a repeating motif - "she watches and waits" and "so long she waited" also, first stanza shows a great introduction to night, very beautiful display loving each line, Lady Poe, I'm so glad to have read this today
Dreamstress, I am glad you like, you have a very high skill with the 5-7-5 poems, you make them seem so effortless so to hear your input is always appreciated.
Again, thanks to both of you for reading and replying.
~Lady Poe
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Good Morning Lady Poe, hope all is well. I keep meaning to try one of these again, my previous efforts have been a little below par, to say the least. I must admit yours inspire me, but also raise the standard to such a high level, they are a hard act to follow! I agree with the Dreamstress that these are like works of art, wonderfully crafted, and so beautifully constructed. The way they are presented makes them easy to read, and offers real pleasure to the reader.
You will probably realise by now, I quite like these!
Such lovely work of beauty, wistfullness, love, compassion, and just...wow...excellent. I like the way they all flow into one another, and the motif was great too. Very soulfull. I can't wait to see more of these. :)
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"Our mothers and fathers held us close to their hearts and they promised 'One bright and shining day my children, we will triumph in battle. One bright and shining day my children, we will give you back your wings.' " - PL: S&W
