Eyelids twitch with fear ~~ nice reference to R.E.M., here. I might've done it more scientifically but that's just my own way of writing, I love to see others share their own, it's quite beautiful ~~ In the confines of my mind Soundless screams echo ~~ah, I hate such nightmares... it's always so frustrating to try to scream of fear but nothing comes out, and everything seems like slow motion and you're so powerless... ah! but you've captured it in 2 lines beautifully - first line to mark the fact that it's subconsciously, and the next to perfectly underline the nightmarish stance I've just detailed... if that was the one you meant of... I might be wrong either way I can relate to this very much, and to see so much developed in such a small structure amazes me great work!
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