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retracted


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sort of a work in progress... but I think I'll just leave it as that and post my other thoughts in prose form... like a letter
thanks for getting me back to writing, guys... it's great, even if it hurts sometimes blankstare.gif

-- Edited by ALEXE at 04:14, 2008-03-04

-- Edited by ALEXE at 04:18, 2008-03-04

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I wish I could bring you back...


Damn.....
Powerful and so very ripe with emotion.

I love the imagery, dark and brutal, showing a vulnerable soul drenched in pain.

Well done, well done indeed!

Hope you keep your pencil sharpened and keep 'em coming. And yeah, sometimes it does hurt... But hey, that's part of the thrill.

Happy Writing.
~Lady Poe

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Goodness boy, this was ASTOUNDING! I can feel every word, and its very being and emotion. Excellent job.

And yes, sometimes it does hurt, but look at what comes out of it? :)

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thank you very much, ladies
I'm happy to see that you like it smile.gif so I added it to my list
Thank you for the appreciation wink.gif

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